saying from the ‘hood – too strong? or perfect and real?
whose bad grant policies would these google dudes rather see thrown under the bus? prob. bing. good call.
be more subtle here
minorities? prob no. just say marginalized
don’t overstate this
this part is great!
mention latinos here?
mom would love this part! you fucking Democrats LOL
for this—do they have to get their own bikes? I think you need to specify
oh I get it now- this is good
need a bigger closing. quote somebody.
dude I have an idea. what about calling your org “Thugs On Wheels”? just a little catchier maybe? I dunno. otherwise this looks great.
